A well structured narrative here with clever integration of your sound clips. Perhaps you could have drawn attention to which sounds were specifically Foley by a screen caption since some obvious sounds such as the car locking were omitted. I was impressed by the music which is what your actor can hear and which mutes then is turned off when he puts his phone down. Clever and showing good understanding of the importance of the difference between diegetic and non-diegetic sound.
A well structured narrative here with clever integration of your sound clips. Perhaps you could have drawn attention to which sounds were specifically Foley by a screen caption since some obvious sounds such as the car locking were omitted. I was impressed by the music which is what your actor can hear and which mutes then is turned off when he puts his phone down. Clever and showing good understanding of the importance of the difference between diegetic and non-diegetic sound.
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